And so it goes. Another chapter done, and there's a couple of rough patches, but most of it got across what I wanted to. I spent an hour tossing and turning in bed yesterday, hating everything I wrote that morning. I decided I didn't really hate the wiriting, but it was a terrible diversion from everything. It was stuff I wanted to write, but it was too much all at once. The plot was seriously derailed. So I've kept yesterday's words and are spreading them out over the next few chapters.
A lot of this chapter needs to be cleaned up, but it's workable.
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