November 15th, 2009

Phoenix

Black River: Day 15

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Probably my weakest chapter ending.  Definitely needs editing.  But that is for a far flung time in the future. Like I said, this chapter was a tough nut to get into, but it turned out pretty good. I just had just as little clue how to end it, as I did how to start it. ;)

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