For the people who actually READ THE STORY, a little poll. If everyone plays nice, maybe I'll give you a tickbox in the future. ;)
So, what did you think of my little tale?
Holy crap, that was awesome!! (I will question the sanity of people that pick this.)
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For a first draft, that was pretty damned rock solid.
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Not bad.
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Better than One More Day, but that's not saying much.
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It burns, make it stop! Take your hands away from the keyboard!
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